November 03, 2007

Song of Sadness

Lost in the gust of rustling wind,

like a beaten skweing stray kite.
I meander on the lonley dark road,
in the clouded rays of lone night

No merciful light beacon my way,

and there’s none to help in dismay.
Abandoning kith, kin and dear wife,
I loaf in the darkest night of my life.

I sang, I danced and tippled wine,

with my family some days before,
I relished the beautiful time of my life,
I was their flower and they my cynosure.

Under the velvet sky we laughed,

and spent our seasons in the sun.
We laughed, we talked and threw pranks,
we made love and rolled with fun.

Sands of time then sank with a wail,

all in a spur, destiny staggered its sail.
mourning waves lapped bodies bled in red,
where my loved ones lied cold and dead.

Those happy flames are now doused,

And I meander lonely on the roads bend.
Heartless and gloomy to my hapless house,
burning candles at both my end.

5 comments:

Aditi Only said...

hmmmm .... seems as if some lines have been picked from some movie .... and if they aren't then there goes my compliment ..... :)

on second thought ....ek baat batao ... is all this inspired from a nicholas spark novel ??

aur itna sab likh to diya but the question remains ....... kyun ???
P.S. : stupid question to fine writer/poet

Kim said...

Hey ady... what movie... tell me i too waana listen... wiase bhi delhna hai , my thought is in harness with which great writter :)

well i wanted to write this sad lines owing to my own life... just that the metaphor chosen are diffrent...

Anonymous said...

its a sad one......hmm...alryt!!!

Anonymous said...

Dam intense, dam sad n too rich in vocab!!! superfine quality bt then.... tu bimaar mat hua kar yaar!! thode se virus ne tujhe ghar baithe aise kaam karva diye!!!

Anonymous said...

just now checked the blog after a long time...Very good one but wo tune jo 'Lines to my own life' bola wo samajh me nahi aaya..!!